Tuesday, July 12, 2011

Rubrics from Lauren Cohen's Classroom

SIXTH GRADE WRITING RUBRIC

Writing to Reflect

BEGINNING

APPROACHING

MEETING

EXCEEDING

Topic/ Idea Development

· Experience unclear

· Little or no detail to describe experience

· Introduction or conclusion missing

· Essay makes no attempt to express what has been gained from the experience

· Experience clear

· Some evidence to describe the experience

· Conclusion incomplete; may appear tacked on at the end

· Introduction attempted; may be simplistic or incomplete

· Essay attempts to express what has been gained from the experience

· Experience presented clearly and in an interesting way

· Adequate details paint the picture of the experience

· Introduction grabs the reader’s attention and introduces the experience on which you are reflecting

· Conclusion effectively wraps up the main ideas

· Essay clearly expresses what has been gained from the experience

· Experience fully developed

· Variety of compelling details, reasons or explanations used as evidence of ideas drawn from the experience

· Engaging, effective introduction

· Thought-provoking or memorable conclusion

Organization

· Arrangement of ideas difficult to follow

· Details appear listed

· Lacks transitions

· Some sections need to be organized into more than one paragraph or paragraphs need to be combined

· Many ideas repeated

· Order and arrangement of ideas sometimes difficult to follow

· Some lapse in the general flow of writing

· Transitions attempted

· Some Ideas may be repeated without elaboration

· Order and arrangement of ideas clear and easy to follow

· Paragraphs have a clear and appropriate method of organization

· Flow of writing is maintained consistently

· Transitions used

· Organization demonstrates some unique qualities that enhance writing

· Pacing and flow of writing feels smooth and natural

· Transitions used effectively

· Writing demonstrates a variety of sentence lengths, forms, and beginnings

Voice/ Word Choice

· Writer distant or detached from topic

· Personality of writer does not come through

· Most of the words used are simplistic

· Writer uses no figurative language

· Some tone may be inappropriate for topic and audience

· Personality of writer comes through at times

· Some words may be simplistic, but word choice is mostly effective

· Writer attempts to draw comparisons using metaphors or similes

· Tone is consistently appropriate for topic and audience

· Personality of the writer comes through

· Word choice is effective

· Writer draws comparisons using metaphors or similes

· Writing consistently lively and expressive

· Personality of the writer consistently comes through, as if he or she is truly interested in the purpose and audience

· Word choice is consistently effective; ideas expressed in a unique, distinct, and creative way

· Writer draws comparisons using extensive or extended metaphors or similes

GUM/ Conventions

· Many grammatical and/or spelling errors sometimes confuse the reader

· Little to no variety in sentence structure and use of writing conventions

· Many punctuation and capitalization errors

· Some grammatical and/or spelling errors

· Some attempts made to use a variety of sentences and writing conventions

· With few exceptions, rules of punctuation and capitalization are followed

· Few grammar and/or spelling errors present

· Some variety of writing conventions is used for creative and stylistic purposes

· Rules of punctuation and capitalization followed

· No grammar and/or spelling errors

· Both commonly and uncommonly known rules of punctuation and capitalization are followed

· Student applies knowledge of writing conventions effectively to edit both his/her own final draft and writing done by others as well

COMMENDATIONS: SUGGESTIONS:

Name________________________________________ Date________________

Oral Presentation Rubric

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The presentation fulfills The presentation partially The presentation does not

all elements of the criteria. fulfills the criteria. fulfill the criteria.

In the oral presentation, the student…

speaks clearly. 1 ½ 0

(I can understand each word you say.)

speaks audibly. 1 ½ 0

(I can hear you from the back of the room.)

speaks with inflection. 1 ½ 0

(I can hear your voice rise and fall with emotion.)

speaks with appropriate pacing. 1 ½ 0

(You don’t speak too quickly or too slowly.)

has eye contact with the audience. 1 ½ 0

(You look up at the audience from time to time.)

uses sensory details or examples 1 ½ 0

of figurative language in the

excerpt.

(Your excerpt has strong word choice.)

gives supporting evidence or 1 ½ 0

details from research.

(Your excerpt gives information from your research.)

TOTAL ORAL _______

Exceeding 6 ½ - 7

Meeting 5 ½ – 6

Approaching 4 – 5

Beginning 0 – 3 ½


Name_______________________________________Date______________Period_____

Book Jacket / Speech Rubric

Title of Book ________________________________________


Categories

Notes/Comments

Points Possible

My Points

Basic Speech Elements

We could hear/understand you. (No gum!)

1

You looked at your audience.

1

You sounded interested, and we could tell you were prepared. You got us interested in the book and didn’t give away the ending.

10

You stood up straight.

1

The time was between 1 and 2 minutes.

1

You had a closing for your speech; it didn’t just end.

1

Plot Diagram

You fully completed the plot diagram. Rising and falling actions were detailed.

10

Book Jacket

Front cover is neat and colorful. It is not copied.

8

Front flap includes a minimum of 4 reviews.

3

Back cover grabs the reader’s attention with an interesting passage.

8

Back flap includes author information. It is NOT copied. It is in your own words!

6

Hand this rubric to the teacher before you present!

Total ______

50

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